Speaking of cool weapon. Moonblade provides the size and the new blade seems to have at LEAST her same edge. The Kelathuzak provides the general shape and at LEAST some of her capabilities (the para-dimensional scabbard and at LEAST her same edge – we’ve yet to see the new blade spin or detach). Lassa provides being Moonblade’s LITERAL other half.
I actually wonder if Lassa provides some power added to that.
I said “ADDED TO THAT” (emphasis, not shouthing). See “Moonblade’s LITERAL other half” above. Her love already allowed Moonblade’s soul to survive and merge with Kelathuzak’s and her own into a new blade. I wonder if her love would also materialise in something else.
Step by step: 1) vote; 2) when you see a picture, right click and choose “View Image”; 3) in the URL bar at the top of the browser you will see the file name, that currently has a 174 in it, alter that 174 to some lower value number. Bob’s your uncle.
I 100% don’t get whats happening anymore :/ like I loved this comic but ever sinc that weird real life but then suddenly fused with game thing happened I am lost. like this doesn’t seem like Bree anymore, this was their game but now it is real? been waiting for any kind of explanation to what is happening but feels like its just not gonna bother to happen
To be brutally honest, it was poorly written and badly explained. The premise of being dragged into the world of your D&D game could make sense and be a genuinely beneficial path for the story to take, but it hasnโt been made clear if that is what happened, or indeed what happened at all.
Any sort of clarification, or re-write, or resolution of that weird hiccup would be ideal. Perhaps a cut to a side-story that tells what happened to Jen on the night she left, and how she became embroiled in the current series of events. The longer itโs ignored and left unexplained, the further the story will drift into incomprehensibility and irreverence. The end of the last arc didnโt make sense to begin with, like the writer started the story without figuring out the end first, and was forced to simply patch on a conclusion as the plot spiraled out of hand. It can be fixed by taking the time to explain, but ignoring it and trying to move on just makes things more confusing for the readers.
That was my creative writing rant for the day. Sorry to be so critical, Wormius.
No worries! I certainly agree that it could have been written better, but I felt it better to keep the nature of Bree’s current mental state a bit of a mystery for the moment. I have no intention of leaving it completely unexplained, however, and we will very shortly be dealing with some of the ramifications of Teal’s meddling in the perfectly natural conclusion to a rather confused and unfocused gaming campaign.
As for a side story… well, there were other people at the table that night.
Personally haven’t had any trouble keeping track of what is happening
Butt, you could do a bit of a flashback after this particular event is over, and they are sitting around a campfire eating roast dragon-nuts, explaining how Bree ended up in Jen’s car (with Beddi in the boot, and Jen in her head) and what happened to Bree
Just noticed the little red cut in the dragon’s humerus above the cut Bree made in the wing membrane. So that dragon isn’t going to be doing any energetic flying, if any at all, without the whole wing breaking.
Somehow this conversation about cuts reminds me of another favorite comic, “Kill Six Billion Demons”, where the Art of Cutting seems to be one of the supreme arts. It can cut not only things, but also reality.
Stop the senseless wing chopping cruelty and killing of dragons!
I would rather be naked than wear dragon scale armour.
People for Ethical Treatment of Dragons
8)
At least she’s not dropping a rock on its head like the last one.
The moment you get a cool weapon your enemies become way stronger.
Damned auto leveling.
Speaking of cool weapon. Moonblade provides the size and the new blade seems to have at LEAST her same edge. The Kelathuzak provides the general shape and at LEAST some of her capabilities (the para-dimensional scabbard and at LEAST her same edge – we’ve yet to see the new blade spin or detach). Lassa provides being Moonblade’s LITERAL other half.
I actually wonder if Lassa provides some power added to that.
I think Lassa provides the most unrivaled power, the power of LOVE.
I said “ADDED TO THAT” (emphasis, not shouthing). See “Moonblade’s LITERAL other half” above. Her love already allowed Moonblade’s soul to survive and merge with Kelathuzak’s and her own into a new blade. I wonder if her love would also materialise in something else.
Heh heh 8)
Damn, missed a week, and still haven’t figured out how to find past invotives ๐
Speaking of… Poor Chasta, bewbs pierced by dragon teeth, and drowning in dragon stomach acid ๐
I think the clue is in the file name. Bonus 174… Either way seems a sad fate for our Chasta.
Guess there can only be one heroine…
Confirmed. Just use the previous posted ones and count down to which one you want!
Step by step: 1) vote; 2) when you see a picture, right click and choose “View Image”; 3) in the URL bar at the top of the browser you will see the file name, that currently has a 174 in it, alter that 174 to some lower value number. Bob’s your uncle.
That’s why it doesn’t work: using IE11 and it doesn’t have the option of “View Image”
ok Bree did level up good, those moves are quite new.
and she looks fucking badass
Thanks!
the skyrim theme started playing for me when reading this chapter?
Thank you for that imagery lol
Another game I need to get around to playing! 8)
I 100% don’t get whats happening anymore :/ like I loved this comic but ever sinc that weird real life but then suddenly fused with game thing happened I am lost. like this doesn’t seem like Bree anymore, this was their game but now it is real? been waiting for any kind of explanation to what is happening but feels like its just not gonna bother to happen
This is probably Bree’s player, Jen, who got dragged into the world which had mimicked the game she was playing in.
To be brutally honest, it was poorly written and badly explained. The premise of being dragged into the world of your D&D game could make sense and be a genuinely beneficial path for the story to take, but it hasnโt been made clear if that is what happened, or indeed what happened at all.
Any sort of clarification, or re-write, or resolution of that weird hiccup would be ideal. Perhaps a cut to a side-story that tells what happened to Jen on the night she left, and how she became embroiled in the current series of events. The longer itโs ignored and left unexplained, the further the story will drift into incomprehensibility and irreverence. The end of the last arc didnโt make sense to begin with, like the writer started the story without figuring out the end first, and was forced to simply patch on a conclusion as the plot spiraled out of hand. It can be fixed by taking the time to explain, but ignoring it and trying to move on just makes things more confusing for the readers.
That was my creative writing rant for the day. Sorry to be so critical, Wormius.
No worries! I certainly agree that it could have been written better, but I felt it better to keep the nature of Bree’s current mental state a bit of a mystery for the moment. I have no intention of leaving it completely unexplained, however, and we will very shortly be dealing with some of the ramifications of Teal’s meddling in the perfectly natural conclusion to a rather confused and unfocused gaming campaign.
As for a side story… well, there were other people at the table that night.
Personally haven’t had any trouble keeping track of what is happening
Butt, you could do a bit of a flashback after this particular event is over, and they are sitting around a campfire eating roast dragon-nuts, explaining how Bree ended up in Jen’s car (with Beddi in the boot, and Jen in her head) and what happened to Bree
At this point, my character would be saying, “Okay, now that I’ve got its attention, what do I do with it?”
๐
8)
Just noticed the little red cut in the dragon’s humerus above the cut Bree made in the wing membrane. So that dragon isn’t going to be doing any energetic flying, if any at all, without the whole wing breaking.
Actually noticed the red bone cut before noticing the wing cut ๐
That dragon wasn’t going to be doing any flying with a cut membrane, which was Breen’s point
Somehow this conversation about cuts reminds me of another favorite comic, “Kill Six Billion Demons”, where the Art of Cutting seems to be one of the supreme arts. It can cut not only things, but also reality.
(KSBD is recommended reading, obviously.)